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I've been asked to get another 1000 words out tonight for my make up class on Saturday morning.

So blogging needs to be cut short.

I had a mentoring session this evening.

Tonight's notes include:

• Show the school scene - too much explaining
• Use the voice in the bar scene - you've nailed it.
• Get your characters to interact with the environment and other characters
• Your characters have to be sympathetic and believable to keep people reading
• The plot will come - but get a loose plan in place
• Don't explain too much of the back ground - let it come in naturally.
• Go in with confidence - you can do this. 

Oh, and don't put in the bar scene for workshopping, there are a few clunky sentences but it is pretty much there. 

So the pressure is on. I'm writing a scene about an Uber ride to Toorak. And just like the bar scene, I need a can of WD-40 and a crow bar to prize them out. 

But it's nice to hear that I'm writing a bit better. 

So back to my character, and Uber driver named Vladislav and a trip down Punt Road.  Fun. 

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